Ep#01 – Coolands Station

Ah, shit!” Gayle, who had just slammed his thumb with a power-wrench, jumped up and shook it. “Damn it!”

He shook his hand madly to work the pain away but it didn’t help. He went to stick it in his mouth but stopped short when he remembered that it was covered in grease and instead wiped it on a dirty rag.

He looked at the bike with disgust. “Goddamn it, reduced to this!”

He looked up from the half-stripped gravity bike, among the thinning crowd he caught sight of a figure illuminated in the holoVid glow. She was moving down the lane past the electronics stores and fast-food diners. It wasn’t so much her beauty that caught his eye, she was dressed workman-like in a pair of khaki drills, a black singlet top and hair pulled back in a pony-tail. It was the saunter that captured his attention – a walk of supreme confidence. To Gayle, her every movement seemed deliberate and cocksure; she munched on a real apple as she headed straight by him, a blue satchel tucked under her arm.

Hey, good-looking –” He leaned over the bike, “I’m finishing up here in a minute – how about you buy me a beer?”

If looks could kill, hers had just blown away the sun. Her eyes, like black holes, threatened to engulf the world around them. She passed by without a word but hesitated, then threw the apple core over her shoulder. “In your dreams greaser.”

Stunned, he caught the apple as he watched her hips roll by saying to everyone, Move out of my way. Clearly, she was someone who handled herself just fine; the RockCutter blaster holstered on her belt reinforced that statement. Instantly he wanted her and thought, Always want what you can’t handle Gayle boy!

He sighed and turned back to the bike and the task of reassembling the primary gravity generator, which was in about a million pieces on the workshop floor. “Goddamn parents, who’d call a boy Gayle anyway?”

About a half hour later Serd, the workshop owner, turned up to close for the night. Gayle gave him a fiery glare. “I finish at 1800, next time you’re late I’ll scarper and leave the shop for the station trolls to pillage.”

Serd folded his arms over his abundant flesh, “Last time I remember I was the boss around here. You finish when I say you do or you’ll find yerself in a cold-cell.”

Gayle grunted, he was in no mood for a fight. He grabbed his bag and tossed it over his shoulder. “Whatever, I’m out of here.”

He badly needed a drink, the last thing he needed was another night in a cold-cell. He still had a crook neck from the last week when he had been picked up by station command officers for ‘disorderly conduct’.

Be in at 800, and don’t get too drunk you tosspot!” Serd shouted after him. “Weavel wants his bike back by tomorrow night, make sure the work is done right – the first time. No mistakes Gayle – it’s your last chance!”

And what? You’ll get another greaser? Fat chance out here!” Gayle said calling Serd’s bluff. They were at least a hundred million clicks from anywhere.

Don’t push me Gayle, you’re not king shit around here!”

With a dismissive wave Gayle walked away. For six months he’d put up with Serd and the drudgery of Coolands, a backwater station in orbit around Eris, a dwarf planet about as far out from the Sun and Earth as you could get and still be in the solar system. He had needed to be far away, far away from everything back then. Maybe things had blown over by now, he pondered but quickly shut his mind to that thought.

The street had filled with folk as Gayle glanced up to the dissolving sky, which had turned a pleasing rosy colour; It was an expensive sky. “God-dam council, a freakin’ painted sky?!” At least it was a good job he spat approaching the intersection of Ryker lane and Neptune road. On the corner, a faltering holovid over the window declared, “Orbit Bar – Cleanest in the Kuiper Belt!” Gayle allowed himself a wry grin at the contradiction and pushed through the discoloured plexi-glass door.

At this hour of the early evening, a happy bubble of post-work talk washed over him. The sound system was pumping out an old favourite. He approached the bar; a few of the customers gave his unwelcome glances.

How about a beer, Dale?” He said.

Dale Whitehead, the proprietor and barman, groaned as he wiped the stained bench-top. “You know you’re banned from drinking here Gayle. I’ll get you a water for 800 credits.”

Fuck that, the booze is cheaper,” Gayle threw up his arms. It was true, a quart of water cost almost as much as a bottle of whiskey these days. “Come on Dale, that was weeks ago – I just need one drink – to round off the day.”

Dale winced and shook his head.

It’s always ‘just one drink’ Gayle. Not here – I can’t afford your ‘just one drink’. There’s always some guy who looks at you funny or somethin’ and before I know it there’s chairs through my window…”

The barman had muscle, Gayle conceded, the kind that comes out of throwing men like him out of bars. He thought for a second about jumping over the bar and helping himself. Gayle hardened his jaw, “So that’s it?”

Dale nodded firmly at his friend – they had hit it off when he’d first come to Coolands. After a moment his expression softened and he leant closer to the mechanic, “Look, why don’t you go down to The Mercury?”

So now he was someone elses problem.

Gayle slammed his hands on the bench and pushed off from the bar, “Thanks Dale, you’re a real pal!” Of course, Dale didn’t know that he’d been banned from there also after his antics last week.

Frustrated, he turned around. Less than a meter away was the woman he’d seen earlier in the lane-way. She was sitting on her own at one of the battered, small round tables, gloat-fully sipping a frothing beer; the blue satchel lay in front of her. Now, so close to her, he noticed the perfect ellipse of her jawline and her nose straight as an arrow; her lips, full but pale were curled into an indeterminate scowl. Gayle glanced irritably at the beer then turned for the door. Now he was full of anger and he always did something stupid when he was angry.

Just as he reached the door it flung open in his face, and three men entered – the middle man he knew instantly. Weavel.

Hello Greaser, hope my bike’s ready?” Weavel said right in Gayle’s face. He was a lanky hoodlum with a jaw too broad for his narrow head, pale ice-coloured eyes and a cheap suit, the jacket the colour of dried blood was a little too big for his frame. It was exactly the sort of gear a small-time crime boss with an over-bloated opinion of himself wore. Gayle immediately wanted to hit him but the lack of alcohol in his blood made him conscious of the fact that he would have to get up and face the consequences tomorrow.

Slowly he stepped aside but held the man’s gaze for a little too long. Out of the corner of his eye he could see Dale had come from around the bar, his jaw set, “On your way Gayle, or I call Cliff to come put you in a cold cell.”

That’s right, run along Greaser.” Weavel lingered on the last word meaningfully.”. . . if you like you might get a drop down at The Mercury?

Gayle shot the barman a hurt expression who immediately looked away guiltily, so Dale was in their pocket, like most of this damn station. With a smack he caught the door as it swung back to close.

Weavel and his cronies didn’t wait for Gayle to leave but passed by and gathered around the table where the woman was now possessively holding the satchel in her hands. Incensed, Gayle slipped out the door onto the street. What was Weavel up to? He thought. An access ladder in the lane-way led up to a window, it was an emergency exit from the upper story and Gayle knew he could get a good vantage of the scene if he liked. He considered for a moment scrunching up his face, “Your curiosity is going to be the death of ya!”

The window was closed but unlocked and Gayle, flicking open a switch-blade, gently forced it up so that he could get his fingers under. There was no real danger of being heard in any case, the blaring music in the bar took care of that. He checked the lane below, which was now darkened – the fake sky now having turned transparent, revealing the twinkling stars. There was no one on the lane but many people passed by on Neptune road thirty meters away. When he chose his moment, Gayle was pretty sure no-one was looking his way and he slipped head-first through the window.

Of the thousands of times he’d been in the Orbit Bar he’d hardly noticed this level, it had always been closed as far back as he could remember and what was behind the bar had always demanded his interest rather than what lay above it. Looking about now, he felt vindicated that his lack of interest had been warranted. This area was full of mundane boxes, crates and broken furniture covered in dust – clearly it was now Dale’s de-facto storeroom. In better days this level must have been full of tables and happy customers, merrily drinking, Gayle mused. A mural depicting a sleek-looking, albeit out-dated vessel streaming through the Kuiper ice fields filled the wall and hearkened back to the golden age of colonisation.

Crouching down, he crept his way between the crates to the mezzanine balcony which circled the main bar below. Directly below he could see the woman holding up the satchel in one hand, waving it about nonchalantly. Weavel, who was rocking back in his chair, followed it with his eyes but appeared to be waxing lyrically or telling some cock-bull story, though Gayle couldn’t hear what was said over the music. Weavel’s two goons stood either side of him, one fingered nervously with something in his jacket pocket; the other tilted his head side to side, cracking his neck, clearly bored.

After a short while, leering meaningfully over the table, Weavel seemed to come to his point, and the woman frowned, shook her head and got up to leave. Raising his hands in mock helplessness Weavel seemed to take offence to this and arose slowly from his seat as the thugs either side of him, now paying attention, moved forward to grab her.

What the devil are they up to? Whatever it is I bet what’s in that satchel is valuable.

The woman, backing-up towards the bar, nimbly leapt onto it evading the clumsy men. She grabbed hold of the bottom rail of the balcony. Below, the scene was madness as screaming patrons tried to get out of the way. The henchmen, crashing through chairs and tables to try and get to her, failed to reach her before she swung herself up and over the balcony rail and onto the crates right above the mechanic. Slipping, she dropped the satchel right onto Gayle’s head. It was then the first shot was fired. It punched into the crate sending fragments of plexi-plast in all directions and continued on its journey burrowing into the mural-covered wall behind it.

Realising that his life was going to be short if he stayed put, Gayle leapt to life stuffing the satchel into his jacket and, thinking quickly, pointed to the open window, “Out!” A series of shots rang out, peppering the space around them and showering them with debris; by some miracle neither of them were hit. The woman, who looked at him with some surprise, needed no prodding and she rolled fluidly through the window onto the emergency stairs. Gayle followed on her heels but paused to see the furious face of Weavel pointing at him accusingly.

I’m gonna kill you Gayle!” Weavel squawked, his face turning scarlet.

Awww, shit, why did I get involved? I was just getting to know this place too! He thought as they rattled down the emergency stairs. They bolted down the lane back towards the workshop. A few men were staggering obliviously in the dark and the pair became entangled among them, the smell of strong whiskey made Gayle desperately want to snatch one of the bottles from them. Behind them they heard a shout and glancing back saw that the two henchmen had bowled out of the bar. He saw one raise his gun and a flash but he didn’t pause for the result. The familiar crack followed a millisecond later and one of the drunks let out a yelp and fell onto the woman groaning; the others scattered like rats.

Come on, I’ve got a bike in the workshop!” Gayle said fumbling for his key-card. He scanned it over the lock and reefed open the roller-shutter of the workshop with a clatter. Fortunately, Weavel’s bike which he had been working on was pretty much complete; accept for some cosmetic plates that he had been cleaning up ready for spraying. He kicked the bike free of the stand ,engaging the auto-hover mechanism and he threw his leg over the seat.

Get on!” He snapped. The woman who was frowning at the partly disassembled bike.

Does it work?” She said, doubt colouring her voice.

In truth he was sure that it was mechanically sound but since working on it he’d learnt it was a temperamental beast. Gayle winced, “I guess we’ll find out.” Seeing few alternatives she swung on behind him; his body enjoyed her warmth but he didn’t have time to appreciate it.

Come on baby!” He turned the engine over which complained, spluttering a jet of blue flame from the exhaust.

The thugs were only ten meters away, and Weavel not far behind, when the engine finally ceased it’s antics and roared to life. “Fucking stop them!” the racketeer barked, firing his gun wildly, the shots extinguishing a holo in a shower of sparks behind them.

Phew!” Gayle squeezed the accelerator hard and release the brake, “Hold on!”

With a high pitched squeal they veered out of the workshop and, underestimating the power of the engine, Gayle lost control and rammed straight into a series of trash cans stacked on the other side of the lane-way.

Fuck! Idiot!” The woman swore kicking away the garbage cans, “I thought you could drive one of these fucking things!”

So…rry.” The apology seemed lame and Gayle hardened his jaw as the first of the two ruffians bore down on them.

Surprising Gayle and the thug both, the woman pulled out a wrench, which she had somehow swiped from the workshop and concealed. Far too committed the thug flailed frantically to pull back before she struck him, but it was to no avail and her swing landed true collecting the attacker in the skull with a sickening crack. He wouldn’t be getting back up in a hurry.

Meanwhile the second thug, grabbing hold of Gayle’s arm, forced the bike to veer towards the wall, scraping along it, ruining the panels.

That’s my fucking bike you moron!” Weavel’s voice was a hollow squeal and Gayle wasn’t sure if it was aimed at him or his mutt of a henchman. Regardless, Gayle released his grip on the brake and at the same time twisted the accelerator to maximum, the resulting thrust almost launched the bike into the air leaving Weavel and his man tumbling behind in a haze of blue flame.

Within a second and a half they had reached the end of the lane which connected into a ‘T’ intersection, “not bad eh?” He shouted over the whine of the engine. Skidding into the corner he expertly dodged a bunch of revellers gathered around a street stall selling fried KriegSticks.

Cut the crap, watch where you’re going Greaser,” She hissed.

Gayle speed away and within a few turns was at a safe distance, he felt the woman relax a little in the seat behind him.

Now what? Gayle thought. They were safely away from Weavel for now but on a station of this size there was few places to hide, eventually they would be found. He slowed the bike and pulled over in front of a holo fountain, a casino in the vogue of ancient Rome, with faux doric columns and a chariot adorning the entry was illuminated behind.

She got off the bike without ceremony, “Give me the satchel.”

Gayle looked at her demanding hand, “Fuck you! I just saved your ass!”

I don’t have time for this,” She groaned,” just give me the satchel and I’ll be on my way.”

Why should I?”

She pulled out her blaster, “Because I’ll blow your brains out if you don’t.”

Who the fuck are you?” Gayle watched her closely, he was usually pretty good at picking a fight; at least when he was sober. Several passers-by looked on with concern. He folded his arms defiantly.

I’m a prospector.” She sighed impatiently, “the satchel?”

Gayle examined the satchel, it was pale blue-coloured and wholly unremarkable. Turning it over in his hands he discovered a label and read it aloud, “Captain Meron Landar?”

You’re a Captain?”

She shifted uneasily, “what of it?”

I saved your life. Now, if you’ve got a way off this station, I need a ride.” He thumbed meaningfully back in the direction of the bar.

Forget it, I don’t take passengers.” She replied looking around, staring down a bunch of youths who had stopped to check them out.

No Passenger, no satchel.” He shook his head. “Besides, I’m more than a passenger, I’m a greaser remember?”

She scoffed. “And what does that mean? A Grav-bike ain’t exactly a starship. What makes you think you can work one?”

He raised his arms modestly, “We ain’t all what we seem lady. Used to work on Mercury Fives during the war.”

She scrunched up her mouth, deliberating the matter. “Alright, I’ll take you are far as my next port then you’re on your own. ”

He nodded, “Agreed.”

Meron smirked ruefully, “good, you can start by fixing my blaster.”

Just as she spoke some guards came out of the casino and pointed towards them, one saying something into his comDev. Gayle revved the engine, “We better get going, I’m sure Weavel has these guys in his pocket too.”

They sped off towards the space-lock. Gayle hoped that they could get to Meron’s ship before Weavel could; otherwise things were definitely going to get messy.

15 Responses to Ep#01 – Coolands Station

  1. stephen says:

    Hey,
    Nice start, I’m interested!

    Watch the use of “your” which should be “you’re”
    ” finish at 1800, next time your (you’re, ie you are) late ” – there’s a couple of others in there as well…
    “god – dam” should be goddamn…..
    meters instead of metres – american spelling – that depends on your market :)
    Oh LOL, wordpress must have an american dictionary built in!! It’s telling me metres is wrong!!
    Anyway, I think ending where it suits to end a chapter’s the right way to go, I think you’ll find the spot in the natural course of writing it…. wouldn’t worry if it’s too long or short….
    I’ll FB you my fave writing podcasts – they’re all worth a listen, and all for slightly different reasons…..
    ONWARD!!!!!!

    • Martin says:

      Thanks Steve, I’ll fix the ‘you’re’ and ‘goddamn’ issues – never quite sure if to use the American spelling – it kind of irks me but I guess, if I eventually want to publish, I’ll need to fit for that market.

  2. Daniel Offenberg says:

    Hi Martin

    Just a couple of notes on your, please feel free to ignore, I’m just trying to help and I absolutely loved it.

    He approached the bar; a few of the customers gave (his) unwelcome glances. – (him)

    Maybe a word or two at the start about the bike being almost ready. It would read better if mentioned at the start when you get to the bit when they steal it. I got the feeling it was all in pieces.

    A little more lamenting from the bartender, if he is really a friend there should be more there, it seems unnatural to call him a friend and then treat him so differentially.

    Needs more explanation (internal dialogue) on his reasoning and intentions when he goes and breaks in to the bar. It might be better if he ponders about possible reasons for the meeting or his interest in the girl and then decides to break in.

    Don’t know if you need this line – What the devil are they up to? Whatever it is I bet what’s in that satchel is valuable It breaks the flow and makes him sound simple.

    Having the guard being bored detracts from the build up of suspence.

    When the action starts, shorten up your sentances. It should read like you are panting. Short and sharp.

    Awww, shit, why did I get involved? I was just getting to know this place too! – I don’t know if he would comment on getting to know the place, His thoughts and attitudes earlier peg him differently

    I love that she stole the wrench, she should always be stealing things

    Great joke about the blaster needing fixing and great story Martin. Well done

    • Martin says:

      Awesome comments Dan, thanks I’ll definitely go back and revise that stuff. I love where your coming from regarding characterisation – I kind knew those there were weak points but couldn’t put my foot on it.

      Re: Gayle’s reason for breaking in to the bar: I want him to be a kind of random guy – the sort who just does stuff but that is not clear at the moment – I’ll have to explain that somewhere…

      Yeah, I forgot about the bike being in pieces! I can add that in the bit while he waited for Serd to come to close up.

      Appreciate you visiting and taking the time to comment. Cheers!!

  3. Tim says:

    First off, love the story so far. One little thing, you used collecting and I think you needed to use connecting: but it was to no avail and her swing landed true collecting the attacker in the skull with a sickening crack.
    Just a really minor thing. Looking forward to future instalments.

    • Martin says:

      Hi Tim,

      Thanks for taking the time to read my story. No, I actually intended to use ‘collecting’ – maybe writing it that way it is an Australian term only – not sure! (PS I’m an Aussie) I’ll leave it as is at the moment and wait to see if anyone else comments on it. Appreciate you pointing it out though.

      Hopefully have another Ep. in a month (or less if time permits!)

  4. Pawel says:

    Keep them coming mate! I cannot wait for the next one.

  5. Lachlan says:

    Great stuff Martin, Let me know when the next one is ready

  6. Cass says:

    Hey Martin,

    its Cassandra from ASFFWA. *wave* I thought I would pop in and have a read of this story. I must say I really enjoyed this opening I think you set up both your characters and your world well, or as well as possible in the first instalment as I am sure we will learn more.

    On the whole collecting vs. connecting thing mentioned above. I think that collecting works, I tend to use the phrase myself a bit in my work. (but then again I’m an aussie too!) I mean if more people thought it worked better as connecting then as you said I would change it but really like the whole Aussie English vs. American spelling thing for me it is purely a cultural aesthetic thing. Hope that makes sense.

    Anyway looking forward to reading the rest of it. :)

    Cass

    • Martin says:

      Hi Cass,

      Thanks for dropping by and reading, I really appreciate it!
      Oh and thanks for the comments too; let me know where I can find your work, I’d love to read it.

      Regs,

      Martin

  7. Pete Aldin says:

    V. cool, Martin. I liked the line “Serd folded his arms over his abundant flesh”. Painted a great picture.

    Feeling sorry for the protagonist already and wondering where he’ll go next.

    Cheers,

    Pete Aldin from ASFFWA

  8. Shaunta Demasters says:

    I truly enyojed this wonderful writing. Be sure to continue this great work. Greets! …

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